The Imagist Poem The Red Wheelbarrow so much depends upon a red wheel barrow glazed with rain water beside the white chickens. --William Carlos Williams In a Station of the Metro The apparition of these faces in the crowd; Petals on a wet, black bough. --Ezra Pound The City In the morning the city Spreads its wings Making a song In stone that sings. In the evening the city Goes to bed Hanging lights Above its head. --Langston Hughes ***************** Both of the following poems were published in the anthology Reflections on a Gift of Watermelon Pickle, ed. Dunning, Lueders and Smith (1966). The Toaster A silver-scaled dragon with jaws flaming red Sits at my elbow and toasts my bread. I hand him fat slices, and then, one by one, He hands them back when he sees they are done. --William Jay Smith Apartment House A filing cabinet of human lives Where people swarm like bees in tunnelled hives, Each to his own cell in the covered comb, Identical and cramped -- we call it home. --Gerald Raftery ********************* You are going to describe something metaphorically without naming the object explicitly. Pick an everyday object from around the house, such as a dryer or iron. Now list some things that it reminds you of or that it could be like. Now all you have to do is write four lines to describe your object. Your lines could rhyme AA BB just the last two above or your poem might rhyme only two lines or perhaps not rhyme at all. ******************** Teacher's Notes I am playing pretty fast and loose with the original intent of "les imagistes", but the ultimate aim is to study metaphor and images. The Red Wheelbarrow is one of the most anthologized poems in American literature. If you look at it carefully, you will see that each line depends upon the one below for completion. Is it also a symbolic poem about the Russian revolution? Believe it or not, this is one interpretation and in a whacky way it seems to make sense. The red wheelbarrow is a symbol of labour, the water glazing is the tears of the revolution and the chickens are the symbols of western capitalism that surrounds the glorious wheelbarrow. Williams said it was just an imagist poem. In an art class, I had the students illustrate the poem and all of their pictures looked the same which has got to be a stamp of approval for the success of this poem. The "Metro" poem is really descriptive if you had been in one of Paris' smoke smudged subways and stood on the platform and looked at the row of faces surrounded by darkness on the other side. Think of an apple tree branch in spring with blossoms on it right after a rain shower. Remember the black bark with white blossoms? Brilliant poem isn't it? Langston Hughes is one of my favourites. I gave some of his poems to a jazz guitarist who wanted some lyrics. He just about went crazy when he read them because of their expressiveness. I don't think an album came out of it but if you are an aspiring musician you might look at Hughes' lyrics. Thanks to Lind Williams for the information about the two anthologized imagist poems.