TOM'S DINER --words and music by Suzanne Vega I am sitting I open In the morning Up the paper At the diner There's a story On the corner Of an actor I am waiting Who had died At the counter While he was drinking For the man It was no one To pour the coffee I had heard of. And he fills it And I'm turning Only halfway To the horoscope And before And looking I even argue For the funnies He is looking When I'm feeling Out the window Someone watching me At somebody And so Coming in I raise my head "It is always There's a woman Nice to see you" On the outside Says the man Looking inside Behind the counter Does she see me? To the woman No she does not Who has come in Really see me She is shaking Cause she sees Her umbrella Her own reflection And I look And I'm trying The other way Not to notice As they are kissing That's she's hitching Their hellos Up her skirt I'm pretending And while she's Not to see them Straightening her stockings Instead Her hair I pour the milk Is getting wet Oh this rain It will continue Through the morning As I'm listening To the bells Of the cathedral I am thinking Of your voice... And of the midnight picnic Once upon a time Before the rain began... I finish up my coffee It's time to catch the train ****************** Teacher's notes This is an imagist poem which just really describes what she sees, but you will notice the interesting thing that happens at the end of the poem. It is actually a poem of lost love. What happened to her which has left her sitting alone in a diner on a Sunday morning? She is watching others kiss and be warm while she is nothing who cannot even be seen by the woman outside. What was the midnight picnic? There is also the wistful "once upon a time". This is a really nice idea of how to use simple images to describe a scene, tell a story and communicate deeply felt emotions. Even the rain is perfect for the sense of desolation and early morning quiet. Give this time to soak in -- play it and then ask the students to just tell you the best images and why the images are effective --do the images reflect an occurence in their own lives? I had one girl cry profusely as we reached the end of our conversation. Apparently, she and her mother had sat in a diner early in the morning waiting for a train to take them away from her father after the parents separated. She remembered the rain most of all.