THE PARAGRAPH TOPIC SENTENCE DEVELOPMENT SAMPLES __________________________________ | TOPIC SENTENCE | | -a generalization- | |----------------------------------| | | | BODY | | --related particulars-- | |----------------------------------| | CONCLUDING SENTENCE | | -the generalization restated- | ----------------------------------- 1- PARTICULARS Today's car manufacturers have not only developed the fastest autos in history, but also the most comfortable and convenient. Soft, reclining, adjustable seats await the driver as he gets in. Even his feet get special attention, being cushioned on foamy floor carpets. Starting the vehicle presents no problems with an automatic transmission. A key is turned, a lever moved, and the car is off. No matter what the weather is like, the heater sends hot or cold air in to suit the occasion. The car radio supplies music and news for the driver's enjoyment. Sudden stops and sharp corners mean nothing as power brakes and steering can stop or turn the car on a dime. Modern drivers never had it so good. 2- ILLUSTRATION Sailing is an invigorating, strenuous, and enjoyable sport. For example, this summer my neighbour and I sailed his sixteen foot sailboat from Bayfield to Goderich and back again through four foot waves and while a twenty-five mile an hour wind was blowing. The constant strain from being "hiked out" or leaning over the side to maintain an even keel and fighting the pull of the wind on the sheets was counteracted only by the invigorating breeze which kept us soaked with spray and wide awake. This experience of sailing the boat at a speed of eight to ten knots through such bad conditions was one of the most enjoyable experiences we have ever had. it is for this reason that I say that sailing is an invigorating, strenuous, and enjoyable sport. TURN OVER>>>>>>>>>>>>> DEVELOPMENT OF TOPIC SENTENCE p.2 3- CONTRAST (Alternation of differences). Teenagers from the city live a different life from that of their country counterparts. First of all, the adolescent from the city has more to entertain her. But the country teens have nowhere to go. In the city there is always a movie to watch, or a shopping centre in which to browse around and catch up on the latest styles, or the Y.W.C.A. where sports may be played. But rural teens usually live more than three miles out of town, and if they are too young to drive, or can't have the car, they are stuck at home. All the movie houses and shopping centres are either in town, or close to it. For the city teen, there is always the telephone on which one may catch up privately on the local gossip. But because there are quite a few people on the country party-line, the country teen can accomplish very few private conversations. As a whole, urban teens lead a different life than rural teens. 4- COMPARISON (comparison of SIMILARITIES) American students of the 1960s uncannily resembled Russian students of the 1860s. Russian students of the 1860s wore long hair and beards, dressed very shabbily , seldom washed themselves (if at all), staged riots against the government, recited poetry without really understanding it, and sang folk songs to the accompaniment of the balalaika. American students of the 1960s wore long hair and beards, dressed very shabbily, seldom washed themselves (if at all), staged riots against the government, recited poetry without really understanding it, and sang folk songs to the accompaniment of the guitar. Plus ca change, plus c'est la meme chose. 5- ELIMINATION You may have been getting the wrong idea of high school education. Education is not the learning of the parts of the miniscule flower, or the life cycle of the heptus hupabitis, or the process of rationalizing the quotient functions in advanced math. Education is not learning how Ramses II fought the mosquitoes, or how tall Napoleon was. Education is not learning what kind of apple fell upon Newton's head, or how much force is needed to move a one ton truck five feet. Education is thinking. If you can't think, you are not educated. All your facts and figures are useless if you cannot apply them to a solution. Have you got the right view of high school education?